wow, that was creepy...
really interesting concept man. and i applaud you for making his hallucinations so believable and creepy-like! it is so obvious that you were copying david firth's style.....so all i have to say is maybe start up a new style or something. i just watched "benjamin" and i have to say this is loads better. anyways, good job...just try to make movies with your own style, not someone else's!